Book Review - Zero (Mech. Chronicles Book 1)
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The beginning of the story was great. There was quite a bit of telling instead of showing, but I pushed through it. Everything seemed to be going great until they ran into the Cogmores. All of a sudden the main character just starts doing his own thing (even though the aliens still have his body orbiting some other planet). Plus someone will get pissed for a split second and then they'll be best buds another split second later. I hate to be harsh, but the author had a great thing going and then the writing, the plot, the characters just fell apart.
Book Review - Legionnaire (Galaxy's Edge Book 1)
In Legionnaire by Jason Anspach and Nick Cole there is definitely a sense of being in the military. Although the swearing is reduced by the acronym KTF, there is still plenty of it. If you aren't sure what that acronym stands for, you'll know what it means by the end of the book. :) The authors do a great job of enveloping you in the military unit. There is the usual sense of comradery, the drooling over weapons, etc, but there are several other layers that make this experience even better.